Majority of the population nowadays exposed to new adverts on daily basis, few of them are appropriate for basic needs, others just lure us by some offers or schemes on the product. In my opinion, advertisements are an important source, about something new on the market, yet we need to perceive them wisely.
Advertisements can impact us in many forms, whether its television in household, newspaper, radio or billboard we pass off while travelling on the streets, we can see them here and there anytime. Many companies hire agencies for advertising particularly, it is a big business in itself. These agencies always starve for attention regarding products and use different strategies. People got tempted to buy a product if they see the item been endorsed be an eminent or their favourite actor or player. Specific offers also encourage the spirit of shopping, apart from these many easy EMI scheme are also a game changer.
Buyer sometime spent money on things they do not even need for reference, some even not aware of for what reason they are excited about an iPhone, but it’s just a trend majority follow. Having a shallow knowledge about the actual product and just the following vogue is a waste of money and time.
On the other hand, if we encounter an advertisement and observe it mindfully, it could be very beneficial for us to take a decision which could elevate our lifestyle. As advertisements provide us with a panoramic range of products of the same category and by analogy, we can get the best merchandise with quality and even inexpensive sometime.
To encapsulate, advertisements are there to help us to know about new products or trends, although it’s up to the consumer to be a smart one or dumped by the glamour’s world of adverts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, while, apart from, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96333333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91650285254 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4069755528 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.083333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285565709257 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092092198394 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403118927819 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147016632141 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362255949525 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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