You have an extra room in your apartment and would like to rent it out to a student. Write a letter to the university council officer and say:– Describe your apartment and the facilities available.– Why do you want to rent out a room?– What kind of

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a student of 'Computer Science Branch' in your college, of batch 2018 to 2022. The purpose of my writing is to inform you about a vacant room in my apartment for rent and requesting you to search for an appropriate tenant for the same from our college.

I live in 'Galaxy Residency, Redmond', which is a walk away from the university center. It is a 3BHK set, with all three bedrooms set with separate washrooms, along with big common hall area and kitchen with all facilities. The apartment is in the prime location and in the proximity of all basic amenities like bank, hospital, supermarket, and many more.

Recently, my parents have shifted in our countryside house, and have no intention to move back. Thus, it is better to utilize the apartment for rent, also, it would be the best idea to avoid loneliness. I would like to prefer a female tenant which should be vegetarian, and hygiene conscious. I am offering one room only for now with the rest of the house facilities in the amount of six thousand per month which will raise per year base.

I look forward to hearing from you promptly.

Your Faithfully,
Anna Mathew

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r month which will raise per year base. I look forward to hearing from you promp...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th which will raise per year base. I look forward to hearing from you prompt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65048543689 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57046971277 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626213592233 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4762965019 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213714924395 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689507620815 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478471226304 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110336327229 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646723422718 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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