Your local council have asked locals suggestions in how to keep the city cleaner Write a letter to council In the letter you should explain what the council can do what the people can do tell how the community will benefit by keeping the city clean

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Your local council have asked locals suggestions in how to keep the city cleaner. Write a letter to council.
In the letter, you should:
explain what the council can do
what the people can do
tell how the community will benefit by keeping the city clean

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in response to your "Clean City Campaign" and would like to provide some valuable suggestions about it.

To begin with, council members have a vital role to play here for the successful completion of this campaign. As several resources are available to them, it would be easier for them to execute this project. The provision of heavy machinery, such as trucks, lorries, and lifters, can be used to remove trash that is accumulated in residential areas. Without these machines, it would be impossible to perform cleaning activities.

Individuals have also an important part in it. Firstly, people ought to create awareness among other people regarding the hazards of littering. People can also perform some activities voluntarily with the authorities, such as helping to place trash bins on roads. Since the majority of people do not throw their waste in public waste bins, this increases problems for local authorities to collect it; therefore, individuals should identify those who do not follow the rules and regulations of discarding waste and report them to the council.

It would also be beneficial for the community. This is because rubbish is the root cause of countless diseases among people. Due to the increase of discarded items on the roads, some diseases have become prevent amongst children in the last few years, for example, diarrhea and vomiting. According to health experts, clean environment affects the overall wellness of a person, both mentally and physically.

I hope that you find the above recommendations worthwhile for the execution of this great work.

Yours faithfully,

Salman Khan

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33962264151 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84670901656 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652830188679 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 290.88556701 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9561520078 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14829782107 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394952791995 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362224381641 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073239351598 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485820463984 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 41.2886597938 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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