Your local council have asked locals suggestions in how to keep the city cleaner. Write a letter to council.
In the letter, you should:
• explain what the council can do
• what the people can do
• tell how the community will benefit by keeping the city clean.
Respected John,
I received letter from council yesterday and was asked to share suggestion for city cleaning. I intend to write this letter to share my views and recommendations in this regard. First and foremost, council needs to schedule daily garbage van visits to the whole council community. This enforcement would ensure timely garbage collection from every council house resulting in cleaner streets and homes.
I truly believe that clearing is not only government responsibility, rather every individual is equally accountable. Residents should take the ownership to ensure cleanness around their area and dispose off rubbish to a designated area of submit to garbage van timely. Furthermore, one week day should be assigned and named as “ weekly cleaning day” in which every resident participate in streets and parks cleaning.
No one can deny the innumerable benefits of clean city and surroundings. This activity would encourage more tourists and reduce environmental pollution resulting in healthy environment and healthy people.
I am sure you would take my suggestions under consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Respected John, I received letter from council yesterday...
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...nder consideration. Yours Sincerely, Sam
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...onsideration. Yours Sincerely, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68604651163 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04029189342 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5306575372 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173720179435 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634962498665 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589563731033 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857002494133 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721666136163 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 8.71597938144 177% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.