A colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you’re not able to attend. Write a letter to him/her.
In the letter, you should:
Explain reason why you cannot attend
good memories you have spent
how you will stay in touch.
Dear Mr. Khan,
I am writing this letter to apologize for missing a goodbye party and to explain its reason.
The cause of not attending the party was unavoidable. As you knew that my father was ill, he suffered from cardiac arrest that day. I cannot even explain how worried I was feeling at that time. My family and I rushed to the nearby hospital but there was no doctor available. After traveling for almost half an hour, we finally found a doctor. He was admitted to ABC hospital, where he was under critical observation for a whole day. The following day, he was released.
Anyways, you will always be part of my great memories. I can still vividly remember the day when we both joined our first employment opportunity. We have gained invaluable experience during that time and I believe we have spent most of our leisure time together.
We will be in touch in the future as well. You have my contact details, such email address, phone number. However, you do not only need to make phone calls or send an email, please feel free to come to my residence any time. I will also do the same.
I hope that you will forgive me and best of luck for your future endeavor.
Yours sincerely,
Salman Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...do not only need to make phone calls or send an email, please feel free to come to my residen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, finally, first, however, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5799086758 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39314715638 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662100456621 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9580753851 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8823529412 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210137529665 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641291889999 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603260387084 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127683271121 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391385647646 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.