You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
1) explain why you have moved.
2) describe the new house.
3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Francis,
I hope you’re doing very well. I’ve shifted to a new house few days ago. The reason due to which I moved is because of insufficient living space in my old house. Earlier, I told you about my living condition you know it was literally difficult for me to live in a small house. My both children are growing up rapidly, and living in a two bedrooms apartment was not easily. So I decided to swiftly search for a new house.
Let me tell you about my new house, it is bigger in size; it has a swimming pool; my children love swimming pool. It has four bedrooms with a luxurious kitchen. Moreover, it’s got three washrooms with an awesome TV lounge. How could I forget about a garden and separate car parking area; the garden is full of disparate kind of plants. In my old apartment, I was concerned for parking space; usually I parked my car outside of the apartment, but now I can park a car inside my home.
Anyway, why don’t you come and visit my new house? I’m sure you’re going to love it. New address and telephone number are mentioned below, give me a call anytime and do let me know when you’re coming.
Hope to see you momentarily, give my sincere regards to uncle and aunt.
Lots of love,
EK
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...ys ago. The reason due to which I moved is because of insufficient living space in my old ...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: bigger
...t me tell you about my new house, it is bigger in size; it has a swimming pool; my children lo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, moreover, so, well, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54148471616 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56280170052 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606986899563 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9579546563 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3125 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151790949527 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567352717743 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568978244884 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994121892782 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490665258311 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.