A glance at the chart provided reveals life process of the salmon.
Firstly, after in upper river, salmon eggs spent 5-6 months under reeds that placed in around a small stones, that eggs will become a fry with 3-5 cm. The fries spent a time about a 4 year to lower river with fast flowing to become a smolt.Usually smolts are 3-2 times taller than the fry. As soon as all fries become a smolt, they reach to open sea and wasted a time about 5 year. Overcoming that stages create an adult salmon and birth a salmon eggs.
Generally,3 stages are transmitted by life process of the salmon and require a 9.5 year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Usually
...ver with fast flowing to become a smolt.Usually smolts are 3-2 times taller than the fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 499.0 965.302439024 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 114.0 196.424390244 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37719298246 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.26757987692 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23146929555 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 147.6 283.868780488 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2063658304 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719242202122 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460666834712 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388999017278 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700628922789 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249239973247 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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