You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Apologize for damaging the product
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
Dear Ben,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing to inform about the Nokia smartphone which I had borrowed from you last year has been damaged. Let me explain in detail.
First of all, I should have been more careful in handling your smartphone but as you know sometimes you can control certain aspects. Additionally, I would like to apologize for damaging your smartphone. To elucidate last week I was commuting from Delhi to Mumbai in a train and it was during this transit the phone fell from my hands and the screen broke. Although the crack on the screen completely shattered the screen on the other side phone functions are working properly after running the diagnostic tests.
Hence I have sent your phone to the Nokia service centre who will change the led screen of the phone and return to the device back to me within a week. The screen replacement will be covered under warranty for the next year in case any issues come up.
I apologize once again and look forward to your response.
Warm wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ben, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'know'.
Suggestion: sometimes know
... in handling your smartphone but as you know sometimes you can control certain aspects. Additi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...after running the diagnostic tests. Hence I have sent your phone to the Nokia ser...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... forward to your response. Warm wishes Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, look, so, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6935483871 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58651326556 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5439223456 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3636363636 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300942487544 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962422127239 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744457495819 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163055361434 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665351120205 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.