Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give our opinion
Discipline in schools is considered to be an ever increasing problem and is believed to be an essential quality which should be inculcated in children at a tender age. However, there is a raging debate that whether teachers or parents play a role in teaching discipline to kids. In my opinion, it is the responsibility of both sides to instil such habits in adolescents. I will in the below paragraphs elucidate on my view with relevant examples.
First and foremost guardians play a vital role in teaching discipline as they tend to spend most of the time with their kids and are very open with their children moreover they act as a source of inspiration which kids try to imitate most of their habits from. In a recent article published by Economic Times, it was mentioned that children pick up habits from their parents at the juvenile age, for instance, some kids are aggressive and some kids are patient, the article concluded that parents do play a major role in laying a good foundation for their children.
Similarly, on the other hand, teachers are considered to be responsible for inculcating discipline in children. At schools teachers can create a much strict environment than home which will force children to endure discipline for instance formation of the line at cafeteria enables children to be patient. This habits inculcates discipline in children at an early age and thus enables them to lead a life in well and mannered way. In a recent survey done from Independent news, it was mentioned that teachers play a pivotal role after parents in inculcating discipline in children.
Thus in my opinion discipline among youngsters is an important asset which needs to be created at an early age. Parents do play an elemental role followed by teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, well, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92333333333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8227862516 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4159859944 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.083333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219647579301 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994584883603 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635625815314 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159352337728 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078012975991 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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