The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003.
The graph illustrates information about how many people used three kind of British airports (Heathrow, Gatwick and Stansted) for travelling purpose over a five-year period from 1998 and 2003. Units are measured in millions.
Overall, the number of people who travelled in Heathrow fluctuated, while the others experienced upward trends over the whole period in question.
With regard to Heathrow, the figure began at 27.2 in 1998, and then it reached a peak of 48.2 in the next two years. At this point, the number of travellers dropped to 37.1 in 2001, which meant the it had far less number than the other airports. Having fallen marginally to 33.2 in 2002, the trend then recovered to 45.6 in the final year.
In contrast, as for Gatwich airport, it serviced 36.5 travellers in 1998. Subsequently. the figure rose steady, peaking at 69.3 in 2003. Similarly, Stansfed airport registered 17.3 travellers in the first year of the period. Despite increasing substantially till 2001, the number of people then remained stable at 43.3 in the following two years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the; it
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Suggestion: Subsequently,
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, similarly, then, while, as for, in contrast, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09714285714 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64991336015 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4329832444 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225603534202 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804732835853 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707984292808 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135230149406 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603837803523 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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