TPO 41 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Modern society has changed radically people´s attitudes towards the role of teachers. In my opinion, I agree with the argument that professors are less appreciated and less valuable than they were previously. There are 2 reasons for my view which will be explored in the following essay.
First of all, the emergence of the internet greatly contributes to the gradual decline of teachers´ importance. People in the past had to lean on their professors to earn understanding and knowledge. However, the boom of internet has revolutionized the way people learn. We now can easily find online teaching resources with detailed explanations and instructions thus do not need much assistance from teachers. An example for this trend is my father´s experience. He has been an English teacher for many years. Before 2000, he was busy teaching as many as 25 classes a week and every class was full of students. However, with the presence of online learning websites and softwares, his schedule has slowly reduced and my father only provides tutorials for ten elementary kids twice a week at this moment.
Secondly, parents and students less appreciate their teachers because of little interaction with them. The surge of online or distance learning gradually replaces on-campus education. As such, rather than face to face meeting with their professors every day to discuss questions and doubts, pupils are able to send their inquiries by email or find solutions from other online sources. My own experience exemplifies this idea. I am currently studying a post-graduate course on computer science via distance learning. The lecturers only send me the syllabus and list of reference materials. What I have to do is self learning. Should I encounter any difficulty, I would rather seek the answer from a range of specialized forums of which I am a member. I feel that way more convenient and faster. As such, I have little interaction with my teachers thus do not have much sense of appreciation to them.
In conclusion, the development of modern technology puts weight to my view that the value of teachers has decreased a lot and students become less appreciated to their lecturers than they did in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... kids twice a week at this moment. Secondly, parents and students less appr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14049586777 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96240230133 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581267217631 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1518989439 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8181818182 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192284208047 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468627084669 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488784545141 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126099227395 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429260549287 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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