Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully.
Others disagree. Discuss both views, and give you opinion.
There are many activities that people plan to do during their free time. Some feel that these times should not be planned for ahead of time yet other disagree. I feel that free time activities should be planned.
Firstly, some people prefer to not plan their leisure time because they think that this time is free and therefore no planning is needed. Free time, by its very definition, is time without any responsibility or previous planning or thought. As you know, if people want to plan leisure activities, they will feel stressed if they don't. For instance, some famous people who work a lot say that they don't require management of their free time.
On the contrary, some other people try to not plan everything, such as their daily leisure time. If they WANT to do something specific in their leisure time, they HAVE to plan it - such as going beyond their country’s border. In this way, they will not lose time. For instance, some people think that they don't have to make plans if its daily leisure time, but if they want to go on a trip they have to do it.
In my opinion, people should plan activities in their free time since the activities will be more arranged if they plan them before. As a result, planning the activities will help to increase exploiting any free time they have for activities. For example, some people who want to travel like tourists will have to plan their free time activities.
In conclusion, I have talked with people who think that they should make plans, and with people who don't believe they should make plans for their free time and I have concluded that I agree with the people who make plans for their free time activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, you know, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 5.60731707317 820% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 298.0 196.424390244 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62751677852 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34406887621 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406040268456 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0169414547 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383994794831 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192270991767 0.103423049105 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733244774706 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275396502569 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699374670588 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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