Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
The idea of whether parents should be held liable for their children's unlawful deeds is always a matter of debate. But
Parents are the first teacher of a child so what their Child do, it is totally depends on them. In my opinion,Parents should be accountable for their
children's actions;however this proposition requires serious consideration before a pluasive verdict can be reached.
There are myraid reasons in favuor of above statement.Firstly, Parents should observe their children closly,like what they are doing and watching because all
all these things have a strong influence on their mind and behavior. Secondly, Children are at the first stage of their life where they are not aware about anything
good or bad influence so parents should behave like a gatekeeper and prevent their children from bad directions.Once a child use violence it proves that parents have failed in their duties regarding good nourishment.
Another key justification for holding this notion is sometimes parents are failed to set a positive role model.Most of the times parents have their behaviour issues.As children are naturally very sharp and they can imtate other very easily.parents bad behaviour will must have impact on a child's
personality.That's why always said that children from not good upbringing have high chances to follow a wrong path.
In conclusion,parents should be subject to punishment when their children break any law or rule.But this rule must be imposed until they are not come of age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34166666667 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09963035431 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.119950921 50.4703680194 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.142857143 104.977214359 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2857142857 20.9669160288 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 7.25397266985 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293652049873 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158252875348 0.0925447433944 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057725872474 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13533970037 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752822070501 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 12.6369458128 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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