parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their home work
Do you agree or diagree
Parents should devote increased amounts of time with their children to help them do their home work. I strongly agree with this statement as i feel parents are more responsible than teachers in this matter. spending extra time will benefit the child and the parent to understand each other well.
Firstly, a parent is the immediate care giver of a child hence he or she is more responsible in educating the child and making the young one to do their regular work without fail. Moreover, child has a innate fear that he or she is been monitored at home so this fear makes them not to fail in completing their home work. Additionally, parents are more keen in making their children understand the subject rather than concentrating on mere scores that the teachers who are interested in scores, grades and ranks.
Secondly, the advantage of spending more time with each other is very useful for both the student and the parent. Learning from a father or a mother can increase the bonding between them and create a strong family connection. For example, children who stayed at home are more affectionate towards parents in their later life than children who stayed in boarding schools.This true bonding between the child and the family member makes the parent understand the capabilities or a child to study.
To conclude, agree that parents have to spend some extra time with children and help them in doing their home work as they are more committed towards their children than the teachers, and this time spent would enhance emotional and social bonding between them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90262172285 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48183796842 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8398758751 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.9 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469402030317 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205988572634 0.084324248473 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154777241404 0.0667982634062 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346438806982 0.151304729494 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13260908263 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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