Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Anna, I am writing to show my interest in joining a music course about which your music agency advertised in recent articles of May.
I am a student of "Bachelor of Engineering" with computers in major and just finished my semester examination. Before the commencement of next semester study, I have ample time of two months. I want to utilize this time to enhance my other recreational skills. However, your advertisement is depicting the course is for the duration of four weeks, I am wondering about for the starting date and the type of music you are teaching. Furthermore, the exact address as it is not mentioned in the advert and about the minimum group size for one batch with fee details.
Although, I have learned the basics of music around my school time and it was my favorite activity, but now I am looking for some intermediate or advanced level courses. Apart from this, I have also won several competitions in cultural programs of my institution, yet I need to practice the skill again.
Looking forward to hearing further information from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Anna Mathew
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, may, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92783505155 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98563535833 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6857579996 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176022116265 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633164084143 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630571335712 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10117622773 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601344662419 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.