To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The best way of study one nation's characteristic is to study all of its cities but that does not seem plausible. Therefore study of the major cities of a country could be more reasonable things to do in order to understand the features of that society .The prompt claims that you can find out so many things about that society only by studying its major cities and I strongly agree with this saying. There are 3 reasons to support this point of view.
At first , one of the most important things about the major cities is the large amount of population. For instance if you want to study on IRAN as a subject , it would be inevitable to study on TEHRAN as one of the richest materials for that survey. Having a major city with large amount of population could give us more information about that society and its quality.
Secondly , major cities have a diverse population. For example London has a diverse population with different cultural , geographical backgrounds that could help us understand that particular society and its features.Therefore study major cities which contain a lot of people with different race,nationality,... could make our work really easy and worthy.
at third , major cities in all countries have more universities and academic institutions that could enhance the cultural habits and the society's characteristics. for instance , Montreal in Canada is one of the major city with more than 4 universities that has massive effect on society's features . The role of universities is deniable in each society culture and qualities.
Although it is told that you only can realize a society by studying all of its cities, but understanding major cities of each society could be good enough to have a realistic point of view about it . it is more convenient and easier to do.
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- TPO-3 Integrated writing 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94389438944 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96003018977 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488448844884 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7362501834 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261452968744 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925299904306 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795201316594 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158997171535 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629224653441 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.