In today’s world, different governments and international organisations are confronting many problems to deal with. What is the most pressing problem among them? How can it be taken care of?
In Contemporary world, Proliferation of problems is debatable amid governments and International organisations. While Air Pollution is grim issue that disturb our ecosystem whether some people think that other issue is important like unemployment, Corruption and Healthcare. This essay will discuss why Air Pollution have significant impact on our ecosystem and health. The Following paragraphs will explain both, the advantages and the demerit of stance taken with the pertinent aspects and examples.
To begin with, there are myriad of reasons which proponents’ site for adverse effect of air pollution. One of the most preponderant reason is that pollution disturbs the balance of our ecosystem, affect out normal lifestyle and given rise to human illness and global warming. To elaborate, according to research national healthcare, 40% increase in human deaths due to pollution compared to last few years. Therefore, it is apparent that government should enforce regulations and impose fine on garbage burning, power plants, brick kilns and many more.
On contrary, there is another stratum of society who believes that unemployment that impact not only the individual but also growth of the country. To exemplify, according to research by Stanford university, 30% increased in crime in some under developed countries due to inevitable unemployment rate. Hence, not only slowdown the economic growth of any country but also social growth as well.
In Conclusion, Governments should raise the Fund to tackle with Pollution especially for under developed countries. In my opinion, Air pollution is top most problem in worldwide and government should apply strong enforce regulations against on pollutant factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... disturbs the balance of our ecosystem, affect out normal lifestyle and given rise to huma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66795366795 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02398200007 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8145786507 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11845514623 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434427812227 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571716815444 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680186629781 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423617883023 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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