It is often observed that to mark an example for the society, whenever a heinous action is done by some individual, the verdict pass as capital punishment. however, it is a topic of argument for some as they believe that it is against the law of nature and it should be abolished.I total disagree with the forth-mentioned statement, as I have an opinion some ventures should not be forgiven and repeated in society, to make it certain capital punishment is the only way.
To embark upon, from antiquity, people are practicing some stringent laws to make the decorum of civilization, and if an individual performs some action against the law, they get punished, to be specific crimes like rape, spreading terror, murder, and so on. Apart from this, it is vital to change psychology among society, it makes them believe that it is not easy to act any heinous misdeeds. In a recent piece of article by the prominent "The Times", around sixty percent of the crime rate reduced by the fear of these capital verdicts around the globe. Certainly, the accused feel shameful and become a social stigma on civilization. Furthermore, passing a verdict against a crime make the population more aware of their rights and also increase their trust in the system of a country.
On the other hand, it is inevitable that there might be chances of wrong decisions because justice is marked only on the basis of pieces of evidence, sometimes it is hard to prove the unfolding truth. Moreover, the people who stay mostly against the law have faith that, it is karma of the individual which can punish them, if we are passing a law to take someone's life then it will be against the law of nature. In an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", which ascertained that around seventy percent people in the world think that these punishments are worthless in today's era, which could depict by the day by day increased crime rate. Consequently, some revolutionized alternate would be required to lower the crippled mentality in society.
To conclude, although capital punishment might be against the law of nature, it is the only way to punish a person against the hinious action done by them. In my opinion, it is important to make the decorum and peace in our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...the verdict pass as capital punishment. however, it is a topic of argument for some as ...
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Suggestion: I
...aw of nature and it should be abolished.I total disagree with the forth-mentioned...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87948717949 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81118387278 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8192899888 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.384615385 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172503108319 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565058174135 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675119611128 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119875442343 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606073848269 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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