Dear Mr Sullivan,
I am writing with reference to the job advertisement for the role of Spanish Instructor posted by you in the Teaching Professional magazine's April edition. I would like to express my interest in the role offered.
Firstly, let me give you a brief summary of my educational and experience background. I did my under-graduation in Spanish literature three years ago post which I have been tutoring spoken and written Spanish skills to the students and professionals on a part-time basis, while at the same time, preparing for my Post-graduation through correspondence. I have given my final exams 3 weeks ago and expecting good results in the next week.
I am very much inclined to take up the role of the full-time tutor in your organization, as I am very much passionate about imparting Spanish skills to the learners. I leave below my telephone and email details for further correspondence. I will be available for phone calls at most times. With this mail, I am also attaching my curriculum vitae for your kind perusal.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Akilan Palaniappan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cting good results in the next week. I am very much inclined to take up the ro...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...parting Spanish skills to the learners. I leave below my telephone and email deta...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ail details for further correspondence. I will be available for phone calls at mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, so, while, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08021390374 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21622968323 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663101604278 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5464190914 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3636363636 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182791434785 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582974998953 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869578075197 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976349022609 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735673398912 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.