Some folk believe that it is good to share information like scientific research, business and the academic planet. Other human think valuable data to be spend freely. In this essay i will discuss what information to be prodcast freely or not. As per my perspective, it's good to shared valuable information among the world.
First and foremost, information it can be a true or false, so human always stay alert about unlimited stream of information details. There are lack of information like animal, scientific research, business, study abroad, missile and weapon. Some of the information on human health, technology, vacancies of job there information provided freely than people aware about and help the stay away from fraud folks. These data help the diminished obesity problem, enhance imagination power, encourage to planet the tree and also technology improve work efficiency. These documents details amid people realize what Happened in the world and what changed in parameter evolulate government. The huge amount of information available on the online internet, so people can not blindly believe, some rumor information also pain the folks. For instance, in the era more young people attached with online they copies the movie, plunder the data other so on activity to do.
Other folks opinion, not every knowledge share like a secret missile detail, weapon, nuclear boom other so on, if shared these information dentrimental effect on human life, soar illicit, fraud, raped other activity continuous doing. Data shared freely, but human can not much focused they more priority given on entertainment, comedy show and sexual other so on.
To recapitulate, knowledge is very importansy each and every filed, but some privacy data can not be shared. Some advice also share like health, education, procedure of in these data help to folks to evolulate life style.
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- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... data to be spend freely. In this essay i will discuss what information to be pro...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'copy'
Suggestion: copy
... young people attached with online they copies the movie, plunder the data other so on...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'folks'' or 'folk's'?
Suggestion: folks'; folk's
...ta other so on activity to do. Other folks opinion, not every knowledge share like...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...on, nuclear boom other so on, if shared these information dentrimental effect on human life, soar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30536912752 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67856082199 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1790669583 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337565060597 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122255159748 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979164585516 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218619860079 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116001103979 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.