Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that economic growth lead to higher living standards in many countries, while others believe that it has a negative effect on society. While I accept that economic development has both benefits and drawbacks, I would argue that there are more disadvantages than advantages.
It is certainly true that economic growth can enhance community living standards. Firstly, in a period of increasing economic, employees usually have a better salary. By having more money, they might buy high-quality goods and services that are able to satisfy their needs and make up fuller life. Secondly, economic development ensures the improving quality of life as more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. For example, the expanding of business could create more new jobs, as the results, the government can invest in the country’s transport network, its education system, and its hospitals, instead of tackling unemployment problems.
However, I would argue that many serious environmental degradations is caused by economic growth. The rapid expansion of industrial factories depletes – and will eventually exhaust - natural resources. For example, fossil fuels used in many industries such as electricity, heating, and transportation. As a result, our planet is facing an ecological crisis, which will result in the extinction of most species. In addition, while natural resources are essential inputs for production in many sectors, production and consumption also lead to pollution and other pressures on the environment. The burning of coal and oil result in air pollution and global warming, through the release of greenhouse gases. These environmental problems then impact on local communities like a higher risk for asthma, for example, may result from air pollution.
In conclusion, while economic growth contributes to the improvement of living standard, I would argue that all businesses should care about sustainable development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61794019934 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09448203146 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4168604646 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2058669936 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661827597491 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05629549891 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137980538392 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045398363677 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.