There is no doubt that economic advancement is the driving force toward a nation’s success. Although some countries are trying to improve their way of living by financial development, some traditional values are getting sacrificed while going through this process. In my opinion, the benefits brought by good economy far outweigh its drawbacks
Admittedly, there are some minor drawbacks to placing too much importance on financial prosperity. First of all, striving for economic growth can cause the citizens to become money-orientated and more materialistic. In other words, after meeting the basic needs, people often overindulge themselves in luxurious lifestyles, which make them forget about the traditional social values, such as value of moderation rather than excess. For instance, a recent study revealed that 70% of the British people think that everything can be bought with money, even friendship and love. Consequently, this negative thinking is not only detrimental to individuals but also it holds back the progression of a country. Moreover, parents are so busy working for money that they overlook the importance of family and the value of a close-knit family is often obliterated as a consequence.
Nevertheless, despite having some minor drawbacks, I believe that a financially stable country has many advantages over a poor nation. One of the most obvious benefits is that it can dispel poverty and enhance the quality of life. This is because, a healthy economy means better job opportunities, higher employment rates and higher income for the citizens. Additionally, an economically strong nation can invest in the country’s infrastructure, such as schools, hospitals and transport network, paving the way to more educated and healthier citizens. For example, Japan has emerged as one of the most successful nation in the last decade due to continuous efforts to propel its economy forward. If Japanese people had only thought about losing the traditional values by risking economic development, they would have not been able to achieve success in the field of finances
In conclusion, I believe that every country needs to work towards economic development as it brings immense benefits, namely improved way of living and financial stability; however, government needs to be careful not to lose the important traditional values on this process.
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere to what extent do you agree with this view 97
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime Do you agree or disagree 95
- Both governments and individuals are spending vast amount of money protecting animals and their habitats This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in sociely such as poverty and health care To what extent do you agree 92
- Some educationalist thinks that international exchange visit would benefit teenagers in the school To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development but some important social values are lost as a result Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages 95
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47282608696 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01836983726 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616847826087 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8146042449 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.857142857 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226376280448 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618911152544 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563259740247 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14253185097 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446424845984 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.