The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods, to what extent do you agree?
Consumer is the king. There is no denying that western culture influences the conventional measures of living the life. Hence, people often tends to follow and imitate the style and fashion of fellow beings. However, I certainly agree with the statement of individuals copying the taste and preferences of other humans and I shall present my views in the following paragraphs.
Research shows that the new lifestyle has been adopted by over half of the population. On account of this, Many varieties of clothes, food etc. have laid a great emphasis on the standard of living. For example, Bollywood style is very popular among Indians for every occasion. They are obsessed with the healthy lifestyle of celebrities. Therefore, imitation is the new practice prevailing nowadays.
Similarly, Different source of goods produced for the end users are likely to open doors for duplication. Commodities which are offered to public at large to ease the living conditions of human beings also fall prey to the hands of replication. To exemplify, In the conventional period, sumptuous cars and mobile devices were not owned by much population but since the evolution of economic growth, the trend of these products have seen a tremendous change for the past few years. it is because of the need to showcase the luxury life one is leading today.
On the contrary, Certain fellow individuals prefer to lead a normal life. For them, it is not worthy to change with each passing trend . Their preference of common living to not following everything like sheep is worth considering.
To conclude, it doesn’t matter whatever the new style or trend one is considering but the orthodox party should also be given equal recognition for their undying values and a spontaneous view towards the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10921501706 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77134082262 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641638225256 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9934058898 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086497517916 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242454067005 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342147428826 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446863538544 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369647346436 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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