Write about the following topic:
The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Medical has increased quickly these days. Many people could treat their health problems in various ways, and they also prevent illness from testing their body in a regularly. However, there are some concerns about people's health, because it will be lower in the future than it is now. On the other hand, many scientists and doctors argue that we don't have to worry about the medical care in the future, because it will develop plenty of ways, and it also include the reasonable ways of price or accessibility.
In reality, many medical treats are developed, so patients could treat their ill and they keep their health problem from medial care. However, a lot of people haven't been cured in the hospital because of the price. They don't have enough money to be treated, so they just have endured their sickness, and it became more worse than before. Furthermore, according to the recent study, many younger generation prefer to eat unhealthy food, like junk food and fast food, rather than eat healthy food like slow food and vegetables. So many nutrients have been not given to younger generation, so they will be getting illness in the long run. Allowing people to eat junk food could make bad results of health in the future.
However, most of scientists and doctors claim that we don't have to worry about health in the future, because medical treatment has developed really faster than before. According to the articles, there are lots of projects have been done for improving the cure environment. Also, when they will succeed to make various medicines and antibiotics in the future, patients might not worry about their sickness by the price. Many majors say the medicines and treatment price will be reasonable in the near future. Additionally, a number of people who study the food might consider unhealthy food to become healthier in the future these days. So fast food have made in good ingredients without using bad materials, also many healthy food will make faster than before because of the improvement of food making devices. As a result of developing the field of food industry and science, people could enjoy the healthy food in short time and better taste.
People's health is one of the most controversial issues that people like debating about. Because of the price and unhealthy food, many younger people are easily getting sickness than before. However, we don't need to worry about the health problem because many majors of the field of science and technology are helping to improve our health care in reasonable ways, and make more healthy food in common.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ny scientists and doctors argue that we dont have to worry about the medical care in...
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Line 1, column 456, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'includes'?
Suggestion: includes
...ill develop plenty of ways, and it also include the reasonable ways of price or accessi...
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Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...m medial care. However, a lot of people havent been cured in the hospital because of t...
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Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the hospital because of the price. They dont have enough money to be treated, so the...
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Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...e endured their sickness, and it became more worse than before. Furthermore, according to ...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the scientists') or simply say ''most scientists''.
Suggestion: most of the scientists; most scientists
...lts of health in the future. However, most of scientists and doctors claim that we dont have to ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...of scientists and doctors claim that we dont have to worry about health in the futur...
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Line 3, column 714, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much healthy food', 'a good deal of healthy food'.
Suggestion: much healthy food; a good deal of healthy food
...ients without using bad materials, also many healthy food will make faster than before because of...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tting sickness than before. However, we dont need to worry about the health problem ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, really, so, in short, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91743119266 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37337782768 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433486238532 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3311151418 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128883404779 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536997764014 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515627928171 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105420332718 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363661316362 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.