the diagram below shows the process of distilling salty water into fresh water.
The pictogram illustrates the process of making fresh water from salty water by distillation.
Overall, I can be seen that in order to produce fresh water through distilling there should be involved five different materials and that the process begins with heating salty water and culminates with fresh water.
To begin, salty water should be poured into a pot, then the pot should be put to the gas stove in order to heat the pot. When water boils the steam rises through the funnel to the pipe.
Following that, a piece of cloth should be put to the pipe to make a round around the pipe. After that a jug of water should be taken and the water from the Jug should be poured to the piece of cloth. With the help of this process evaporated water takes liquid form. Liquid water then is go through the pipe. Finally, distillated water is poured into the bucket.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the gas stove in order to heat the pot. When water boils the steam rises through the...
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Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...takes liquid form. Liquid water then is go through the pipe. Finally, distillated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55128205128 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20866591593 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49358974359 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8898989795 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8888888889 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390420345497 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198877883497 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126662148421 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298278963874 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945055968001 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.