Do you agree or disagree with the following statement;
Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
Life has different meanings according to human being.Some of them thinks earn money is the most important thing but others do not agree them.To whom thinks money is the most important thing also say that if they earn a lot of money they see they are successful.I disagree with this sight that money should not be the measure of success because you cannot buy health with money or you cannot buy happiness with money.In addition earning money some what depends on luck of you.
First of all, there are a lot of rich people all over the world.They have lots of success in their life.They can have what ever they want as goods.However, some of their family members or they also have health problem which is incurable.Although they tend to give their all wealth to cure the illness, it is impossible to solve this health problem. So, money does not make sense in this situation .
Secondly, money does not have relation with happiness.People who never have lots of money may think that if they have, all the problems will be solved and happiness will come together. This is obvious and proved fact that money does not bring happiness.In addition to this it may cause to harm our relations as well.Because when you have a lot of money, your attitude may change to the others and it makes you an unpleasant guy.
Lastly, to earn money you need luck. During lifetime, two people may follow same steps but while one of them earn a lot of money, other may lose everything financially.I think, if you do your best you are the must successful person.
To sum up , money is very important material in our life. However success is not depends earning a lot of money because you cannot have happiness and health with money.Also if earning money is not inside your faith you cannot earn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65923566879 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52202880757 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512738853503 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.580773133 48.9658058833 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.555555556 100.406767564 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8888888889 20.6045352989 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7777777778 5.45110844103 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363817545595 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16521302948 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101334413325 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224647969056 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977725542184 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 11.7677419355 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.002688172 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.