Life has been always determined by the events that we have been through , and as a result of that most of us have the opinion that what we had been experienced in the past is the pillar of how we are acting in the future and as I’m concerned I support this idea and believe that past has a big value in our life.
First of all, your personality is considered as the reflection of what happened to you in the past so because of that we can notice that most of the criminals had a hard-measurable life when they were children.
on the other hand, I believe that the more events you had experienced the more mature you will be as you will have the ability to distinguish between what’s wrong and what ‘s right.
Besides that, most of the writers had described the life as the best source of information and even better than books as it enriches our personality by learning from different experiences we got used to face.
Furthermore, I would say that most of the nations now are living in peace after what they have learned from their past that violence and wars had abolished their civilizations and brought the hate to their people.
However, most of the researchers and scientists had built their new theories depending on the previous discoveries that participated in the development of our societies and that we are part of.
For instance, few days ago NASA had published the first colored picture of the black hole praising Frankenstein’s relative theory which had been considered the corner stone of this feat.
In other words, science is an accumulated process which depends on what had been discovered and invented.
in conclusion, I would like to assert the past events had always been a part in our life socially, scientifically and even mentally. So, it would be impossible to overlook the importance side of it in giving us the opportunity to move forward.
- some people prefer to live in a small town . other prefer to live in a big city . which place would you prefer to live in ? use specific reasons and details to support your answers 66
- Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
Life has been always determined by the events that we have b...
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Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... by the events that we have been through , and as a result of that most of us have...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...surable life when they were children. on the other hand, I believe that the more...
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Line 6, column 196, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to facing'.
Suggestion: used to facing
...rning from different experiences we got used to face. Furthermore, I would say that most ...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...at had been discovered and invented. in conclusion, I would like to assert the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79090909091 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84337061198 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512121212121 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5593715813 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.1 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.6045352989 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1 5.45110844103 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102350081699 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040063962166 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269131168187 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0423679640046 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279133872184 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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