The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others however believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's health.
Over the past few decades, children have faced the ongoing obesity problem. Although fair amount of people advocate that, rapid increment over establishment of fast food restaurants and hotels are causing the problem. Other, however, argue that, parents are responsible towards negligence over their children's habit.This essay will discuss on both views and will come to explicit point on why the blame goes to parents hands.
Those who advocate the former point, believe that, enormous numbers of fast food outlets werestablished just under quick time and products they keep on menu is especially adulterated. Subsequently, they think that, fast food restaurants outnumbered the normal restaurants and thereby influencing the children's habit. Furthermore,
research from world health organization has pointed out that number of obese children are fairly high in developed countries than it was in 20 years ago. Easy availability and cheap products sold by fast foo restaurants carry fatty contains which would cause children from being physically fit.
On the other hand, it is clear that, parents from developed countries have spoiled their children continuously. After the various advent of technological gadgets, children are particularly interested in spending sedentary lifestyle. Moreover, mothers are markedly interested in engaging on jobs oriented activities which cause children to expose less towards physical fitness thereby causing them to put on unnecessary weight.
In conclusion, although growing numbers of fast food and outlets are contributing in this particular problem, parents are the one to restrict their children's unnecessary eating habit. They really need to focus on controlling their diets and maintaining a good schedule for extra fitness classes. Introduction of laws by government about the control over establishment of fast food outlets would be handy as well.
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- The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think that this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's he 56
- The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others however believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73144876325 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90082118986 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6269448966 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326455475016 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112474828273 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670618024728 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170100426568 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275229987502 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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