Some people believe that competitive sports are important in children's study, whereas some believe that it is not useful as children feel that it is the only competition and winning. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Sporting activities are something that provides a way of hard work and increase skills of an individual. Many argue that competitive sports play a significant role in children's education while others believe that it may not be supportive as it may lead to a feeling of competition and winning the sports only. Here I would enumerate the pros and cons of sporting event in schooling.
Importance of sports in child's education is noticeable as it helps in nourishing one's physical and mental ability. The concept of hard work and concentration boosts up due to the consideration of sports in academic work as it provides a way of refreshment from the burden of studies. It is also a way of skill development. It creates a feeling of competition and a will power of winning. Such activities encourages the value of co-operation and a sense of responsibilities.
Now coming on to the cons of sporting activities in study, children's focus is replaced from study to these sport activities. Children draws all their focus and concentration on sports and the importance of subjects get minimized. They believe that sports are the only competitions to participate and win rather than being attentive towards their academic work. But what I think is that involvement of sports is necessary in education as no other activities except for studies can make child an introvert person. As it is well said by someone " All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy". So school should involve children in sport activities once a week which would neither disturb the academic focus nor one will get distressed by burden of studies.
Hence, to put all in pocket, sporting activities should be considered along with other studies but giving less importance in comparison to academic subjects.
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Message: You should probably use 'encourage'.
Suggestion: encourage
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at involvement of sports is necessary in education as no other activities except ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, while, except for, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02356902357 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02565674476 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531986531987 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6438108123 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215750560003 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741241754342 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710089696941 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131127710674 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520592739162 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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