Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is a king them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that after arrival the of latest technology, communication made much easier in society. Some people argue that social relationship has improved due to modern technology, but others, on the other hand, feel that this development made socialization less in the family.
On the one hand, the emergence of new technology definitely plays an important role in both family and society and it reates a strong bonding between people. Connecting people through electronic gadgets and internet are possible and therefore, people could contact their favourite people from long distance instantly. For example, today, any one can contact their friends and parents within a short period of time with some calling applications like IMO, BOTIM and so on. This facility could not only save the time and money of an individual, but it also could maintain a sound relationship with them.
However, others believe that the invention of new technology would adversely affect the interpersonal relations between parents and children in a family and society. This is due to the fact that many people, especially youngster, are addicted to mobile phones and computer and consequently, they may not spending their quality time with their siblings or parents, whereas in the past people used to spend time on face to face communication. For instances, social sites like Facebook, Watsapp and other online game like PUBG are certainty ruin the precious time of many people. Therefore, many family are struggling with keep up a real relationship.
To sum up, although the most recent technology can build a greater relation with other people very quickly and safely, I strongly feel that it will indeed effect the real companionship both family and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
It is true that after arrival the of latest technology, communication made much eas...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tant role in both family and society and it reates a strong bonding between peopl...
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Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir favourite people from long distance instantly. For example, today, any one c...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...istance instantly. For example, today, any one can contact their friends and parents w...
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Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...heir friends and parents within a short period of time with some calling applications like IMO...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'many families'.
Suggestion: many families
...recious time of many people. Therefore, many family are struggling with keep up a real rela...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ly, I strongly feel that it will indeed effect the real companionship both family and ...
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Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... companionship both family and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, may, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23928571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78167977074 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4058555368 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.363636364 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143564267832 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525021504192 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491559817032 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927373424892 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242457560095 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.