The bar chart provides information on the total number of telephone calls were made by three different categories a seven year perod from 1995 in the UK.
It can be seen from the graph that in 1995, the amount of local fixed calls had the highest at well over 70 billion minutes, whereas the lowest calls by mobile phone at only around 1million minute. Meanwhile the figure for national and international was just under 40 million minutes.
Between 1995 and 1999, the number of all telephone minutes showed an increasing trend. In terms of local fixed calls, which rose slightly from near 80 billion minutes to a peak of 90 billion minutes. Similarly, the number of minutes were used to call national and international also increased from 40 billion minutes to 58 billion minutes. But the usage of mobile calls had always very less within the given period.
In contrast, the following two years had noticed a significant differences. The number of minutes used by to cal local people registered a remarkable decline which dropped to 72 million minutes from 85 billion minutes, while the amount of mobile minutes reached almost doubled ( 45 billion minutes ). But at the same time, the figure for local and international fixed call minutes grew slightly to reach a moderate 60 billion minutes from 55 billion minutes.
Overall, it is clear that the number of minutes local fixed calls registered a decreasing trend, however other two types of calls were found a rising pattern in the UK.
- Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home.What are the causes of this?What are the effects of this on individual and society? 89
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relev 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Meanwhile,
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...ways very less within the given period. In contrast, the following two years ha...
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...of mobile minutes reached almost doubled 45 billion minutes . But at the same tim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, well, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93253968254 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51500830205 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531746031746 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4641812012 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272341463247 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115621036533 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814390095295 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173551962254 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744259984104 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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