Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having a job is an important part of human's need in these days, while unemployment rate is increasing more and more in the world. However, there are a few chance for finding an appropriate occupation specially in the undeveloped countries, and many people think that they should use their first chance, but I do not think so. Choosing a good jab is very critical; I feel this point for 3 main reasons, which I will explore them in the following essay.
First of all, selecting a wanted job fulfills man's mental power. However, there are many works which have better incomes or more comfortable; but I believe that mental's needs are the most determining factor. For example, last year I started my work in a famous factory with an appropriate position and salary; but I felt disappointed. The job was not related to my major and I quit it after several mounts.
The second reason that we should not take an unsatisfied job is that our creativity will not help us in that position. Consider a true story of mine when I worked in a teaching center last mount. I should teach math for high school students, while I detest it. As a result, I could not do my best and explain according new method and up-date knowledge. Teaching only for doing duty caused not only the students got low scores, but I also felt much boring.
Last but not least, being successful in a job needs to effort and passion which will gain only by motivation. If some one takes a work only because its security, he/she will not try more. For instance, when I compare teachers whom work without instinct and only because of economically purposes with others whom really love teaching, I clearly see the differences between their work quality and happiness.
Overall, what drives somebody to choose a job according to his/her satisfaction rather than security, can be related to his/her mental's power confidence, creativity and happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun chance seems to be countable; consider using: 'few chances'.
Suggestion: few chances
...more in the world. However, there are a few chance for finding an appropriate occupation s...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...b needs to effort and passion which will gain only by motivation. If some one tak...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...which will gain only by motivation. If some one takes a work only because its security,...
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion rather than security, can be related to his/her mentals power confidence, cre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7915407855 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64813233247 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610271903323 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3589417177 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205315657562 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615685301982 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365324629944 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106524059146 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252461592357 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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