It is true that owning a home is often the top priority of people across the globe, and the rise of the real estate price makes it gradually demanding for the majority of the population to achieve it. Hence, I tend to support the idea that government plays a critical role in housing people with difficulties.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why government patronage should not focus on housing issues. The first one is that developing countries suffer other pressing problems such as fresh water and famine. In Africa, the dearth of fresh water and sufficient nutrition makes death pervasive. Besides, with the generous support from the government financially in terms of getting a house, citizens may become too reliant and thus neglected to work hard and thrive hard in life. In some cases, people would lose their house because of business debts, and if there is a safety net that housing is available at a minuscule amount from the government fund, their rebound would not be as prodigious and profound.
On the other hand, free housing would offer people many perks. Firstly, proper shelters are well-considered as human basic needs. Without a proper house, people could not focus on anything to improve their lives. Secondly, natural disasters have been eradicating thousands of people's houses globally, and have influenced their lives catastrophically. In this case, the government plays a pivotal role in re-housing people. The sooner people get a place to settle down, the sooner they can get back to their normal life.
In conclusion, while some people may argue that government funds should be invested in other areas, I believe providing basic accommodation for its citizens should be the main focus.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...modation for its citizens should be the main focus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07719298246 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66731294108 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9337283009 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26880559466 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837406806347 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561116896396 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16501878573 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192882248307 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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