It has been an alarming condition across the globe regarding animal abuse and the controversy over the necessity of zoos. While the existence of zoological space is still widely believed to play a crucial role in entertainment and education, I tend to support the idea that animals of all species are deserved to live in their natural habitats and have their freedom.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why zoos are becoming pervasive in the modern society. First of all, the introduction of animal displays are meant to satisfy human curiosity and to amuse human superiority. This initial intention has been perpetuated through the expansion of zoos all over the world. Today, zoos have become one of the most favorite destinations for family. Besides, observing a wide range of animals from different parts of the world contributes toward the cognitive development and expands our knowledge about nature. Children would be able to see penguins from the South Pole and polar bears from the North Pole right in the central park of New York. Hence, it is undeniable the positive impact of zoos in delivering animated visuals and mesmerizing experience to the wide audiences.
However, despite some of its perks, more and more people have been aware of its drawbacks and supporting the idea of animal freedom due to numerous reasons. Firstly, when animals are removed from their natural habitats, their natural instincts deteriorate drastically. For example, lions under captivity would lose their ability to hunt preys because they are fed with raw meats everyday. Secondly, being kept in a small area may have pernicious impact on animals. For example, many of them would suffer depression after a passage of time. Finally, animal abuse is also a growing concern when zoo animals have not been treated properly in many developed countries. Without sufficient funds from the governments and visitors, not only are zoos unable to provide adequate source of nutrition, but they also does not receive proper training to take care of animals, which results into animal abuse.
In conclusion, while it is still a contentious issue whether zoos are there to be retained, I believe the wilderness is where animals truly belong.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...eys because they are fed with raw meats everyday. Secondly, being kept in a small area m...
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Line 5, column 806, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...uate source of nutrition, but they also does not receive proper training to take car...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64323407789 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612637362637 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.13868224 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.352941176 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150252061984 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451421163833 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367007190172 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101957877538 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231398498353 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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