It is true that dwellers of certain area do not make a visit to local historical places as well as galleries and museums. There are some probable reasons behind it and potential solution to this is to promote and made them more appealing for visit by locals.
The main reason that inhabitants tend to ignore historical site is that they generally aware about history of a place and the most have already seen local attractions and would rather prefer to spend their time and money on other activities. Meanwhile tourists coming in any place have a purpose to learn about the culture and tradition of the place as fast as possible and the best way to do it to visit museums and historical sites. In addition, they have free time and prepared budget for this kind activities.
There are few measures, which can be taken in order to increase interest in museums and historical places among local people. First, authorities should campaign in order to promote and encourage locals to visit them. In addition, price of the tickets should be less for local people in comparison with foreigners. Furthermore, a good way of promotion is to invite famous exhibitions to local museums and conduct historical reconstructions and festivals on historical sites. All these measures will attract a lot of local people and tourists as well. As a result, local tourisms will be blooming and inhabitants of the area will be interested in supporting it.
In conclusion, the issue of not visiting museums and historical places by locals is widespread around the world and this is because inhabitants of an area generally know their own history and probably already visited them. Various measures can applied in order to appeal them and it will probably lead to a new era of the tourism in the area.
- In some countries, there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work and not at home. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Governments prohibit the underage children for getting full time jobs in certain countries Is it good thing or bad thing 77
- Young people who commit crimes should be punished in the same way as adults Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Rich countries are getting richer while poor countries are getting poorer What is the cause of this What could be done to solve this problem ese countries need to implement policies that would help them accumulate the capabilities 54
- With an increasing number of people eating fast food which if eating to regularly can cause health issues some people think that the only solution is ban it completely To what extent do you agree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...eir time and money on other activities. Meanwhile tourists coming in any place have a pur...
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Line 5, column 661, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ea will be interested in supporting it. In conclusion, the issue of not visiting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88815789474 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68427502502 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506578947368 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3278129156 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413485888522 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144348535027 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667838863253 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238306496193 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667976877001 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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