When you choosing a place to live there is a lot of factors which you have to take into account. It’s not an easy process and every person defines some most important for him features to make a choice, such as location, number of rooms and so on. But despite the difficulty of choosing a place to live I have three most important characteristics which I pay attention: location, size, price.
First of all, I look for a place which will be near enough to my university where I studying, because it provides some benefits. Generally, not so distant place from university allow to save money because you have not use a public transport every day or use taxi. Moreover, it saves a lot of time. For example, two my friends live and studying in Moscow, but one of them usually spends almost hour or even more to get to university across the whole city, when the other lives in dormitories near the university and spend about fifteen minutes to get to campus.
Secondly, I pay attention on size of the apartment. I think that you shouldn’t choose huge flats with two or three rooms, because, for example, you have to spend a lot of resources for just keep it clean. Usually I live with my parents in medium size apartment with two rooms and it easy to spend all day to make apartment clean. For example, when I was in other city in last month and did my part-time job, I lived in small one room apartment. It was easy and fast to made room clean because apartment is three time less than my home apartment.
Thirdly, price for apartment is important for me. You can find an ideal apartment which will be close enough to you work or university with perfect room size but you can’t buy it because you haven’t enough money for her. As a result, you should variate some characteristics such as location, size and others important features for you which can allow you to find another good one flat.
In conclusion I would like to say that I strongly believe that most important feature when you choosing a place to live is price. You always have to start from defining the range of prices which will be affordable for you and try to find a good one flat using other specific characteristics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When you choosing a place to live there is a...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...l be near enough to my university where I studying, because it provides some bene...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: saving
... so distant place from university allow to save money because you have not use a public...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'used'.
Suggestion: used
...llow to save money because you have not use a public transport every day or use tax...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57537688442 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59944872199 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464824120603 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1751040949 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.117647059 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251214486658 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092961123429 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069861468359 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165054274807 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698723530865 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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