You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
- Explain your situation
- Describe your problems
- Tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Arpita,
I hope you will find this letter in good health. It is to appraise you that it would not be possible for me to move in a new accommodation early next month. I am in a fix as my brother who has to support me in transferring of luggage, is leaving for his hometown for a family emergency and he will be back after a fortnight.
Further, I thought of opting the movers and packers service, but to my utter dismay, All India Transport Association has called a strike from tomorrow in protest of recent diesel price hike. As this strike is for indefinite period, movement of goods will take place after negotiations between association and government. Singlehandedly, I am not ready to move in, as bulk of my goods include imported delicate machines that are part of my research studies.
I believe, that you will take my concerns into your consideration. I am sure of shifting to the much awaited customized apartment from October, when my brother will also join back. Please accept my sincere apologies for any hardships you have to face. Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours Sincerely
Amit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ships you have to face. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours Sincerely Amit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71282051282 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80867445648 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4326969354 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5454545455 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234030092378 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108015615448 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881568669474 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155857344666 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102143639752 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.