Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. Why are children doing this and how serious are the consequences?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and more junk food than home-made food.Although , fast food has less nutritional value ...
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...e junk food than home-made food.Although , fast food has less nutritional value th...
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...is catching among the younger generation .There are numerous reasons that are driv...
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... catching among the younger generation .There are numerous reasons that are driving c...
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... To begin with, parents are working too much hours,they dont have time to prepare fo...
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...with, parents are working too much hours,they dont have time to prepare food at home....
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...parents are working too much hours,they dont have time to prepare food at home.There...
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... dont have time to prepare food at home.Therefore,fast food shops now are opening every d...
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...e time to prepare food at home.Therefore,fast food shops now are opening every day,yo...
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...ast food shops now are opening every day,you can find in each corner of the street ....
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...ou can find in each corner of the street .These shops are easily approachable and ...
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... can find in each corner of the street .These shops are easily approachable and reaso...
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...asily approachable and reasonably priced,though,eating in these restaurants is becoming...
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Suggestion: among the youngest
...is becoming a part of the status symbol among youngest people,thus children are spending a sig...
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... the status symbol among youngest people,thus children are spending a significant sha...
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...ocket-money at these places. Moreover,fried foods have bad impacts on children heal...
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...ch as cholesterol and heart functioning.When food is fried,it looses nutritional val...
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...and heart functioning.When food is fried,it looses nutritional values and lead to f...
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... nutritional values and lead to fatigue.The consumption of processed food can make ...
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...arns eating junk food because it causes to much diseases such as diabetic,heart at...
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...s eating junk food because it causes to much diseases such as diabetic,heart attack,...
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...causes to much diseases such as diabetic,heart attack, and cancers,..... To sum up,...
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...ch as diabetic,heart attack, and cancers,..... To sum up,fast food is more avai...
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...t attack, and cancers,..... To sum up,fast food is more available and not over pri...
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...od is more available and not over priced,it has less nutritional values .Over consu...
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...er priced,it has less nutritional values .Over consumption of junk food causes hea...
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... priced,it has less nutritional values .Over consumption of junk food causes health ...
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...tion of junk food causes health problems .Therefore, it is advisable to eat more h...
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...on of junk food causes health problems .Therefore, it is advisable to eat more healthy fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, such as, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52777777778 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24385994846 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615740740741 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6597969425 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 238.8 106.682146367 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.2 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188159353855 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109678269261 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531079366915 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125782238737 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456303106283 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.0946893788 200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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