WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its
reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...........,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
Have a good day,i would to tell you that I'm a daily user of the bus transportation services,but in the last 2 weeks the bus specially in my area is not reliable,and not clean at all.
As per my daily use,the bus is usually coming in 7.30 Am so I arrive on time to my work, but my concern is for the last 2 weeks the bus came late around 15 min so it affect my duty time.Although,the working staff are not helpful,if you ask them why the bus is late ,they don't have any logic answers.
So,I suggest first sir,to offer a training course for your working staff and make a printed schedule timing for the bus services to avoid any late for the bus.Also,the company can offer a fully maps for the bus station and how the drivers can use alternative roads to avoid the late in the rush hours.Secondly,you can ask your company to make maintenance for the bus.
Finally,I will be thankful if you solve the problem as soon as possible.
All my respect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lve the problem as soon as possible. All my respect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38888888889 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74682757529 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.572093594 44.8134815571 296% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.0 76.5299724578 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.0 16.8248392259 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.2 4.34317383033 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134019827607 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640578941422 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439514085253 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650583293522 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045145205957 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 8.37731958763 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 8.62886597938 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.