Line graph : channel one news viewing figures.
The line graph elucidates the number of viewing figures of channel one news from January to December. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable fluctuation of viewing figures occurred at 11 p.m. and is measured in millions of viewers per day.
To begin with, there was a gradual palpitation in the number of viewers at 6.pm. between January, which was at just below 5 millions, and November, which made up at just over 3 millions, and in the following month, it jumped slightly to achieve at well beyond 3 millions. Furthermore, January to May witnessed a significant upsurge for the amount of viewers at 09.30 p.m. to just under 4 millions, and erratically, the number of it oscillated, soaring to just across 3 millions by the end of the period shown.
In accordance with the other aspects, by January, the number of viewers at 11 p.m. stood at well under a million, unexpectedly, it uplifted and dropped tremendously, finishing to just less than a million in the next 12 months. In contrast, the total of viewers at 1 p.m. remained stable over the entire period in which it ended at well beneath 2 millions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74111675127 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80077033388 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2185966762 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.428571429 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939267738965 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784256863175 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173997836558 0.0843802449381 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106348822357 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150399946919 0.0819641961636 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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