Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Change is a necessity that can never be avoided. There are people who believe in doing the same things all their life and hold a belief that they will get perfect in that. Others, on the other hand think the opposite.

Some people believe that by repeating the same thing, a perfectionist is created. For example, if a person practices the same thing, he will be so good at that job that he would not worry about other things. The people with this thought however, would want to avoid any changes in life. Another example is of a surgeon. The surgeon gets better in his professional by doing the same thing over and over again. It is his years of experience that not only him but all the other people around trust in.

In contrast, a great amount of people I believe, would oppose the idea of not changing with time. Today’s world is ever changing and those who cannot keep track with the changes can neither survive the competition nor will thrive in life.A well known example is of our generation and a generation before us. The technology has advanced so much now and the older generations have not been able to keep up with it. Due to the fact that the younger generations have accepted the changes and molded over with time and have indeed taken over the the workplace with better salaries than those who has had years of experience.

In a nutshell, as should be clear from the arguments above, change is inevitable and those who can embrace it will benefit from it while the rest who do not will suffer greatly.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...the competition nor will thrive in life.A well known example is of our generation...
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Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...er with time and have indeed taken over the the workplace with better salaries than tho...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...er with time and have indeed taken over the the workplace with better salaries than tho...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55072463768 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34442408741 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7431852063 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247267394285 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895703111575 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753276244156 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155206194697 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108279849722 0.0819641961636 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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