Some people believe that the environment issues can be solved by increasing the pride of the fuel. In my opinion, however, I totally not agree with it. This policy is too idealistic to execute.
As the price of fuel raises up, our transport system is the first one would be crashed .To individuals, general people need to spend more money on their vehicles for their work, especially those who rely on the cars to live would pay more on their price of fuel such as bus drivers and taxi drivers. To the government, it may not provide convenient public transport as good as the past. Or, citizens will be forced to pay more taxes to maintain the fuel price required for public construction. On top of that, the price of food and the livelihood supplies will be getting extremely higher in a short time by increasing the price of fuel.Based on the above reasons, people will feel more inconvenient in their daily basis. After that, the crime problems will appear.
Changing the price of fuel without any relevant policies not only cannot be the solution for the world’s environmental problems but also will cause other social issues. Personally, the best way to solve the environmental problems is that everyone around the world is aware to protect the earth by recycling, reducing the garbage and decreasing the carbon dioxide emissions.
In conclusion, the environmental issues have bothered these worlds since decades ago. It is not only the responsibility of a few units or the governments, bot also the duty of every citizen.
- The best way to solve the traffic congestion in city is to provide free public transport for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages? 73
- The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91570881226 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74387823163 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.9738203929 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150817753343 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056553461353 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067308292412 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106717204643 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862308906643 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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