The old tradition of having a meal together get disappear. how it affects the individuals and community?
The traditional form of taking a meal together get endangered in a few next years. A decade ago, people are conscious of having food daily with members of their families. It has happened in recent years, we see different people in daily routine and many of them are not able to get their lunch or dinner with their families because of their busy work life and late schedules to come home. Another, people who lived apart and far away from their families also faced a lot of difficulties to maintain a sustainable amount of connection and meetings with the different people of their families.
The outgrown wants and needs of the human being make them disconnected from their loved ones, it actually ties them away and reduces the level of coordination and communication. The balance between professional and personal life get unbalanced by the time and it is only because people are not aware of how they managed work task and free days. They are unconscious about how their family feels and how they get stressed by living their life alone. they actually forget the meaning of togetherness and the old days which is cherished by them with their families. They don't realize how this small thing makes a bigger impact on their liveliness.
The disappearance of the old traditions impact over the people and their life very drastically, when it comes to joining family parties, lunch, and dinners; most of the individuals are getting scared because they hesitate to talk with the other members and feared to communicate their thoughts in front of everyone which makes them depressed and demotivated as well. However, it is also a threat for communities too, they get weakened by losing faith over people who are not interested and willing to join them, and they get dissolved by the time.
In conclusion, the people who live out of their home or within the home, they need to understand about the importance of getting together every day with their family members, they make a healthy balance between their work life and personal life, so they have full time to enjoy with the family on their free days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83149171271 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53608161541 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505524861878 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7358329811 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.75 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166492337332 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779207665085 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632079213918 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107638606212 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375709657104 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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