Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The noise pollution always considered as the casual one and everyone takes it very lightly. some people argued that to decreasing the noise pollution, few strict rules and regulations create by the government while others believe that they could just make as much noise as they want. I totally agree with the first statement because it is really important to control the most underrated form of pollution in present days which is incredibly grown day by day.
In one hand, the people who want to make such sound for their own enjoyment and happiness have a huge impact on social life. For an excellent night out or having a fun on weekends found as enjoyable but it can be a problem for others. For example, students and kids mostly have a bad effect on their ears and brain which attacks as a migrans and deafness on their health. This comes as a serious pain and even death could be possible. Additionally, the employees and workers also get disturbed by major horns and traffic comes around the working place.
On the other hand, the benefits of providing a strict rules over using sounds may have changed the thinking and usage of horns and sound systems in a night clubs. The government needs to set up rules like first, after midnight it's totally banned to open the bars and clubs. Second, the horns are prohibited in the city roads, every citizen is responsible for following rules and regulations of traffic without using sounds. Third, coöperate and coördinate to support the decorum of the health through giving the necessary information to children and young people so they understand the effects of their behaviour. The social classes and campaigns are often made on the public roads to let help people find out about the rules. The police officers required to go on the bars who broke the rules and punish them for it.
In conclusion, I support that the strict action on people for creating noise voices and specially in night can immensely improve the quality of life and the level of freedom from these pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, third, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79545454545 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44016727343 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9907767144 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206512336468 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577576764967 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930640143102 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114730323977 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789616610818 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.