You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Every country should have a free health service, even if this
means that the latest medical treatments may not be available
through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays,there are a lot of diseases we are facing in our world due to the high pollution in the atmosphere,sure it will affect our health by direct and indirect ways.healthcare service is one of the human rights,it must be provided for each country's population,so every country should have a free health service if the medical treatments is available through the service.
however,I agree with the last one because what is the for the check-up without any treatments I can give for my population? sure it will be useless.For example in my country healthcare consists public and private sectors,public health is covered through the ministry of health which operates medical facilities through health services.The health insurance covers employed people and students in the school through governmental clinics.
Also the ministry of health offers the free vaccination for babies up to 2 years,which I founded necessary to the community health.Some diseases which the medicine is very expensive,but before we give the free health service we must have the medicine so the government help their population to face virus C
The second type of service is the private one ,through the medical insurance company,each has his own plan which cover some clinics and hospitals in the emergency case,it mustbe helpful for this section.
To sum up,in my opinion if the service is not too much high quality at least the country find the way to help the people through the free service once the medical treatment is available.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, at least, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23265306122 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97569216431 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.084147192 49.4020404114 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.4 106.682146367 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.0 20.7667163134 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203931512814 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114626248817 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559242592941 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116991970399 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523292619558 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.