The given graph indicates the regular highest degree everyday over twelve - month period in four city namely Auckland, Christchurch, London, and Edinburgh.
Overall, the cities in New Zealand shared a similar trend while the other two also had a joint trend by beginning and ending at the nearly lowest degree.
Auckland and Christchurch is stablized at well under 25 celsius before suffering from a wildly plunge in July where Auckland reached their nadir at 15 celsius and this number of Christchurch is just over 10 celsius. There was an gradually leap from August and ended at more than 20 celsius at the end of the year.
London and Edinburgh degree was steadily level-off since January. Those city meet their peak at more than 20 celsius and 17 celsius in London and Edinburgh perspectively in July. Afterward,the weather turn colder by dropping to the begining degree in December.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a joint trend by beginning and ending at the nearly lowest degree. Auckland and...
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Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'nearly the lowest'.
Suggestion: nearly the lowest
...t trend by beginning and ending at the nearly lowest degree. Auckland and Christchurch is ...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('wildly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('plunge') instead of another adjective.
... under 25 celsius before suffering from a wildly plunge in July where Auckland reached their na...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...urch is just over 10 celsius. There was an gradually leap from August and ended at...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('gradually') instead an adjective, or a noun ('leap') instead of another adjective.
...urch is just over 10 celsius. There was an gradually leap from August and ended at more than 20 c...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...inburgh perspectively in July. Afterward,the weather turn colder by dropping to the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly. Afterward,the weather turn colder by dropping to the begining degree in Decem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06802721088 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64184004926 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680272108844 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1655309049 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164710377471 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757717932727 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606389114693 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111860741606 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493248415852 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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