Artists are people with creative thinking and bringing up the ideas that are never imagined before. It is true that artistic thinking require a non bounded environment and best ideas are penetrated when there are no pressure from the surroundings. It is acceptable statement that artists should be given a total freedom to enhance their thought process.
Firstly, as we all know that the minds of creative people cannot be matched with any other persons. The ideas and representations coming out of artistic people are impeccable. And it is a very popular saying that artists are the people who are born talented and has a mind process which works entirely different from normal people minds. To attain a specific degree of precision artists should be promoted to work in a free environment. Best imaginations are attained when the environment is free from any pressure, furthermore, imagine a workplace where people are scolded for conducting mistakes and hence, as a result the productivity decreases.
When people are liable to work in a fixed pattern the imaginations are lost and creativity will extinct, therefore, it is vital to accept the mistakes conducted by artists because we learn from our mistakes and the result which would appear after working in a free environment will be top notch.
Hence in conclusion, it is ideal for every artist to work in a free environment without any restriction to achieve a flawless result with great precision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'total freedom'.
Suggestion: total freedom
... statement that artists should be given a total freedom to enhance their thought process. F...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...promoted to work in a free environment. Best imaginations are attained when the envi...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
...r working in a free environment will be top notch. Hence in conclusion, it is ideal fo...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... free environment will be top notch. Hence in conclusion, it is ideal for every ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10833333333 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85714260913 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545833333333 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3517166303 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197586415547 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968943762917 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634251963978 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125400003341 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792301276015 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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