With the advancement in medical technology life expectancy has significantly increased. In developed nation average life expectancy has dramatically improved. Furthermore, we have found cure of almost all the diseases and many of the dreadful diseases which are non-curable earlier can now be treated easily. This raises a potent question is this a blessing or a curse?. In my opinion, advanced medical technology has its own set of advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, it is an undeniable fact medical technology is considered to be the biggest boon for our society. We are blessed with advance tools and technologies and the researchers which are constantly working to find cure for epidemic diseases. Additionally, according to a survey conducted by a prestigious organization it is identified that since the last decade life expectancy has improved on average of 10 years. We now have cure to cancer and almost many diseases which are impossible to cure earlier.
Secondly, proponents on the other hand argues that since, the average life expectancy has increased we now have more people to feed and more retired and old people to take care of. This phenomenon has altered our social system and now we are overcrowded with people which are difficult to manage. Thus, according to them it is a curse that people nowadays are living longer.
Hence, in conclusion, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that medical advancement is a true blessing to our society we now can take care of our well-being without any troubles. Thanks, to medical technology we can now live longer and much healthier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19465648855 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00965029066 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538167938931 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6009006324 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2142857143 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182373971813 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765128147446 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662550240821 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120856714753 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061754219138 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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