Some people think that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people think that one of the useful people connecting of different cultures is music, while others say it is not.
This essay will discuss about music ways of bringing common tastes of folk and personal opinion would be given in the end of the essay.
Firstly, most people listen to music and sing all their lives. Because music brings good mood and removes the whole stress and fatigue in human. In addition, all of these rhythms sometimes bring people to one general dance. For example, the International song “Uptown Funk” - Bruno Mars knows absolutely everyone, and many of them usually do not understand the meaning of this song. However, citizens make from this song different international flash mobs and challenge dances.
Secondly, popular music could bring a wish to learn the language of the songs. For instance, Korean songs - KPOP listen more than half of teenager girls and boys of the world, and most of them wants to understand what their singer sings and talks about. Nowadays, because of this, Korean language begins to be one of the famous language of the humanity.
All in all, the given essay gave own personal point of view and demonstrated benefits of music by joining community of different languages together.
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| 2019-05-10 | Azizat Gilmeyeva | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06730769231 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47950327847 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1785951037 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8181818182 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268630888682 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962865544567 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645655831278 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144746857874 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743132723212 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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