Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Most of people working at unlucky and hard works not by their wishes, while other type of people enjoying their life with attempts by improving skills in work. This essay will discuss about the ways to change such situations by rysking.
Firstly, every person would get a bad lifestyle by working at unsatisfactory job. For example, full-time work can be harmful to health, moreover, there would be awful feelings like stress, fatigue, reluctance and others.
Secondly, person’s shortage of money will not able to allow what he wants. For instance, to care of family it would be need a lot of money, and if person have little money, then sometimes have to starve or work without stopping.
Some people, nonetheless, succeed risking their lives, after which they become more happy, lucky, concerned and will be able everything. This type of people earn more money than people who works at unsatisfactory jobs, and could afford everything what they want and need.
In addition, there are some group people who get a good work not risking, but by improving and trying their skills at different areas of work.
They achieve this work with the help of some correct or intelligent decision, after which their life changes much.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
Most of people working at unlucky and hard works not b...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to change such situations by rysking. Firstly, every person would get a bad li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05853658537 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49652226876 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624390243902 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0492928369 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.7 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133262962413 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584270288764 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332664964514 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692718683451 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029267525373 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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